I love the details of Ryan's life shared in the first part of this short monologue: Living in Milwaukee, misadventures in Germany, using Accutane and its effects. Ryan's life feels so precise, so lived in.
Which makes the climax and conclusion much more powerful. We know Ryan has the abilities to describe the details of what happened, but he just doesn't know them.
The result was that I felt a lot of empathy for Ryan and I realized that sometimes there are powers greater than ourselves that might step in when we are at our lowest.
Harrowing but fine writing.
I love the details of Ryan's life shared in the first part of this short monologue: Living in Milwaukee, misadventures in Germany, using Accutane and its effects. Ryan's life feels so precise, so lived in.
Which makes the climax and conclusion much more powerful. We know Ryan has the abilities to describe the details of what happened, but he just doesn't know them.
The result was that I felt a lot of empathy for Ryan and I realized that sometimes there are powers greater than ourselves that might step in when we are at our lowest.
Harrowing but fine writing.